Winter In Minnesota Is Not For The Weak And Childhood Can Be Rough.
Making attempts at the French villanelle!
"Villanelle is a nineteen-line poetic form consisting of five tercets followed by a quatrain. There are two refrains and two repeating rhymes, with the first and third line of the first tercet repeated alternately until the last stanza, which includes both repeated
A tercet is a stanza with only three lines, and a quatrain is a stanza with four lines. Thus, the villanelle has nineteen total lines. There is also a pattern of two refrains, which are repeated lines in a poem or verse. Therefore, in a villanelle, two different lines repeat throughout the poem.
Lines may be of any length, but are often written in iambic pentameter and follow an ABA rhyme scheme."
Practicing the French villanelle:
Winter in Minnesota is not for the weak
Good for you for being a snowbird
We may follow you in another week
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Oh, it has been tough for me, so to speak
Arizona, Florida, Mexico I'd be as happy as that bluebird
Winter in MN is not for the weak
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Sounds good today but I can't freak
Don't always take my word
We may follow you in another week
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I like the idea of a mountain peak
I couldn't live there I've heard
Winter in MN is not for the weak
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It wouldn't hurt to take a peek
The snow has made it awfully blurred
We may follow you in another week
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Maybe we could sneak
A peek on the third
Winter in MN is not for the weak
We may follow you in another week
February 22, 2019
Poem a day in February
Practicing the French villanelle 2:
Childhood can be tough
It doesn't have to be
Some have it real rough
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Many will never have enough
We won't always see
Childhood can be tough
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For many years we may bluff
Note I'm talking we
Some have it real rough
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You may think it's all just fluff
You'll never know what it was like for me
Childhood can be tough
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So I need to get off my duff
I could've been an amputee
Some have it real rough
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Pick me up by the scruff
I wasn't an adoptee
Childhood can be tough
Some have it real rough
About the Creator
Denise E Lindquist
I am married with 7 children, 27 grands, and 12 great-grandchildren. I am a culture consultant part-time. I write A Poem a Day in February for 8 years now. I wrote 4 - 50,000 word stories in NaNoWriMo. I write on Vocal/Medium weekly.
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Comments (4)
Well done! Enjoyed this Villanelle. Beautiful.
this is great. Well done.
Nice job - I definitely identified with the poem about MN winter - same here in Northern WI! ❄️
I completely missed this but love the form and the mood your convey