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Do i really need to explain?

By Mohammed DarasiPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
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Incessant the Wheel

It keeps on turning

Frustrations building

Stomach rumbling

Eye brimming with crimson

Hands on mug, flinging

When will it be ending?

When will it release?

The wheel still spinning

Until i decease

"A few moments now"

Yeah sure, i believe you

I have work to do

But not sure it is true

So please tell me how

I can move past you

And say to you "ciao"

And bid you adieu


Furling my brow

I take off my shoe

And aim at you... PLOW!

You're now just old news


Now look at this scene

My fist through the screen

Glass everywhere

Sprawled hardware

At my desk I'll never be seen

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Mohammed Darasi

I write fiction, poetry and occasional articles about interesting topics. I recently created a website (just because) which I will be posting my writing in (among other things). it would be great if you check it out. https://mindpit.co.uk/

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Comments (6)

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Oh, I felt the frustration on this one 😅 So relatable! I have a Mac but sometimes I get the spinning beachball of doom 😅

  • Oneg In The Arcticabout a year ago

    I’ll still never switch to Mac 😂😂😂 well done

  • Rick Henry Christopher about a year ago

    This was really well written... Great job!!!

  • Lol, this was hilarious!

  • Roy Stevensabout a year ago

    That was great! 😂😂😂

  • Donna Reneeabout a year ago

    I actually laughed out loud at the shoe part 🤣🤣🤣. Your writing is so fun, Mohammed!!

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