Windows update
Do i really need to explain?
Incessant the Wheel
It keeps on turning
Frustrations building
Stomach rumbling
Eye brimming with crimson
Hands on mug, flinging
When will it be ending?
When will it release?
The wheel still spinning
Until i decease
"A few moments now"
Yeah sure, i believe you
I have work to do
But not sure it is true
So please tell me how
I can move past you
And say to you "ciao"
And bid you adieu
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Furling my brow
I take off my shoe
And aim at you... PLOW!
You're now just old news
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Now look at this scene
My fist through the screen
Glass everywhere
Sprawled hardware
At my desk I'll never be seen
About the Creator
Mohammed Darasi
I write fiction, poetry and occasional articles about interesting topics. I recently created a website (just because) which I will be posting my writing in (among other things). it would be great if you check it out. https://mindpit.co.uk/
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Comments (6)
Oh, I felt the frustration on this one 😅 So relatable! I have a Mac but sometimes I get the spinning beachball of doom 😅
I’ll still never switch to Mac 😂😂😂 well done
This was really well written... Great job!!!
Lol, this was hilarious!
That was great! 😂😂😂
I actually laughed out loud at the shoe part 🤣🤣🤣. Your writing is so fun, Mohammed!!