it’s seven A.M,
I’m awake again,
I feel a chill in my house,
I see the tail of a scampering mouse,
as I scream “good morning” for all to hear,
both far and near;
I can smell the coffee as it brews,
my tastebuds reject the muffin I choose,
yes, another day quickly commences,
bringing to life, my five senses.
Good morning, thanks for reading, hope you enjoyed this short eye opener.
About the Creator
Moe Radosevich
I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you
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Comments (5)
Mmmmm, coffee! Loved your poem!
What a lovely, warm poem! Wonderful job!
A lovely read on a Sunday!
Haha! The tastebuds part made me giggle. And now I need some coffee to smell and taste! 😁😁😁
Good one, buddy!