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Why Society Feels Dead

When the music shoves the feet and the faces rotate, no one makes it out alive.

By Caitlin CharltonPublished 6 months ago Updated 6 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - March 2026
Why Society Feels Dead
Photo by Lerone Pieters on Unsplash

There were breakthrough lights

in the greyness of the clouds.

Look around;

there is no one

on the green tennis of the field

upon which light had beamed.

*

They are hiding behind

headphones,

earphones,

blocking out peers.

So grave

like grey clouds.

What can control our delusions?

Delusion of life after death

death after life.

You walk the street,

but you aren’t going anywhere

after the clock strikes six.

After the mountains are filtered by the fog.

Who is there for us to scream down on?

*

Cars driving by

Conversations going black.

Voices pulverized by the pistons.

You hear that someone is stressed.

This group is better than them;

they have no friends.

Hidden emotion

clipped by the wind.

*

Even in cafes,

music shoves the feet.

They whisper into the tune of the day

as the faces rotate,

sitting like a product with their backs up straight.

Not a single word with an aim,

all so the coffee beans could get paid.

Moving south, moving east

they go to the club during the night.

Not a single ounce of them had made it out alive.

Society is dead.

No one knows you;

no one knows what is true

About you.

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About the Creator

Caitlin Charlton

Writer first. Close reader and self‑taught critic shaping eloquence.

A survivor reclaiming her territory.

I write dark fiction and poetry through symbol, shadow, and fracture.

Always sharpening the craft. ✏️🔥👠

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    Written by Caitlin Charlton