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Why not!

why not try once again from the new !

By DarkosPublished 2 months ago Updated 2 months ago 2 min read

In this park,

There are two sides one is cold and dark filled with ducks

the monotony of dark blue in it reveals the sadness like an ocean-deep cry or maybe a scream of anger from Him all covered in an unrealistic unemotional smile a strange doze of happiness no joyfulness

the second one is more of sunlight with waterfalls and fountains full of real emotions and happiness that are felt

love and warmness real empath space full of Light that can be not only seen but experienced

These two sides remind me of a relation with one another in most cases one is a cold and dark star and the other is the light that helps to get out from the shadow of the cold one but alone prefers to hide and walk in the shadowy of Her thoughts invisible to the rest with the world that only she can be and feel in there reaching transparency and creating a distance to stay safe

but still, She does try to share

cuz why not try it all?

even if every try is never that beautiful that good to be in for more hours, days, weeks, months, years

She still tries cuz why not?

to get out through another way and mind

the beauty of it and calmness and bliss

is what she knows and feels about the reality of it!

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  • Sugan Ya 2 months ago

    Great!...I loved it

  • Naveed2 months ago

    I enjoyed this one, Darkos. This writing was outstanding.

  • AL. K.2 months ago

    Very beautiful writing! Yes, that’s what we do, try and again try, no matter what! ❤️❤️❤️

  • Babs Iverson2 months ago

    Fabulous!!! Loving it!!!❤️❤️💕

  • I'm so mesmerised by the dichotomy that you have pictured here! Awesome poem!

  • I enjoyed this one, Darkos, but I feel you do a disservice to ducks, LOL. I am just teasing a little, but I have to admit it raised images in my mind of a horrible, emotionless, joyless and cold world full of ducks. Maybe I shouldn't like ducks so much... but I do enjoy your writing.💙Anneliese

  • Alexander McEvoy2 months ago

    I really enjoyed this one :) I think I'll have to read it again to properly soak in the tone and meaning

  • Alex H Mittelman 2 months ago

    Fantastic! Great work!

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