Whispers of Distraction
Navigating the Labyrinth of Temptations
Drifted away from the present moment's embrace,
In the realm of diversions, my thoughts find their space,
Slipping through fingers like sand, elusive and fine,
Time surrenders its hold as distractions intertwine,
Reveling in fantasies, a brief respite from reality,
Amidst the chaos, I seek moments of clarity,
Caught in the web of allure, I falter and sway,
The sirens of distraction, beckoning me away,
In this tumultuous dance, I often lose my way,
One step forward, two steps back, a constant delay,
Nudging my focus astray, like a gentle persuasion.
About the Creator
Una Savage
I'm Una Savage. I love reading and writing, and I enjoy traveling. Most importantly, I'm the mother of an autistic child which is both challenging and rewarding, and it has taught me a great deal about life and myself.
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Comments (2)
Your poem effectively portrays the emotional tug-of-war we frequently experience, highlighting the conflict between giving in to distractions and remaining present.
Wonderful flow! This was so real and so well done!