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Whirl Wind

Hurl Whirl

By Andrew C McDonaldPublished 4 years ago • 1 min read
Whirl Wind
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To the carnival I took my girl

There we rode a tilt-a-whirl

Flung us it did round and round

Flung my girl upon the ground

Where she commenced to violently hurl

surreal poetry

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Andrew C McDonald

Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.

Never mind. I give up.

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    Written by Andrew C McDonald