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Whip-Poor-Will

a villanelle on stars and sitting ducks

By Mackenzie DavisPublished 9 months ago Updated 9 months ago 1 min read
Winner in Villanelle of Regret Challenge
Whip-Poor-Will
Photo by Ramil B. on Unsplash

My family has a boat upon the lake


I’m sure they mean me no harm nor ill will.

See how the water becomes a moonwake.

                     

My brother brought a spear and killed a drake

I saw it out my bolted scuttle sill.


My family has a boat upon the lake.

                     

My mother keeps begging me my thirst to slake

She frets so when the cups she holds near spill

See how the water becomes a moonwake.

                     

My papa calls me his own sweet cake,

His love tuning the call of a whip-poor-will.

My family has a boat upon the lake.

                     

When I asked the stars if death was to make

I heard naught but chop out from the night’s chill.

See how the water becomes a moonwake.

                     

I’ll not see it come, nor will I awake

The stars prepare a bed for me to fill.

My family has a boat upon the lake.

See how the water becomes a moonwake.

Villanelle

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Mackenzie Davis

Popping in for a brief season. A small bubble has surfaced and will burst again soon, no doubt. New stories expected at unexpected times. Vocal is for challenges, so I will oblige.

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    Written by Mackenzie Davis