When Winter Woke
A Tautogram
When Winter woke,
We watched,
While wind whistled,
While wildflowers wilted,
While water widened whole.
We watched,
While white was whisked wherever,
While wee wrens wandered wherever warm was,
While women wove with wool.
When Winter woke,
We whispered,
"Welcome."
While we wondered,
Why?
When Winter woke.
About the Creator
Deanna Fratus
Deanna Fratus is a writer based out of Massachusetts. She enjoys writing fiction. When not writing, she enjoys producing music, studying genealogy, and raising her 3 children.
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Comments (7)
This is so stunning!
So beautiful. Congrats on runner up 👍🏼
Congrats on your placement! Well done. 😊
Beautiful and vivid imagery, Deanna! Congrats on your placement in the challenge!!
Congrats on runner up.
Congratulation on runner up!!!
This was both very deep and beautifully written. Loved your Tautogram!