sun.
sun soak.
soak sweet sun.
sun-soaked sweet skin.
sweet sun-soaked sea skin.
salt-soaked sea skin, sweet sun.
soak sweet salt sea-skin. sun. sand.
sandy-skinned. salt-soaked. sweet, sunny, sparkling sea.
sea-salt sparkle sand. sun-sweet, soaked skin summer.
summer salt skin sparkles. sweet sea. sunny sand.
sand-sparked summertime. sun-sweetened salt skin.
salt-sweetened sea sand. summer skin, sparkling.
summer skin: sparkling salt, sand, sea.
salty sea sparkles. summering sand.
sand-sparked salty summer.
sandy summer sparkling.
summering spark.
summer.
About the Creator
Dane BH
By day, I'm a cog in the nonprofit machine, and poet. By night, I'm a creature of the internet. My soul is a grumpy cat who'd rather be sleeping.
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I love that you capture a younger, simpler time and that the movement of the poem itself feels like the ocean. The visual of the wave helps it all the more. This was VERY well-dine!