When The Glitter Washes Off
An Exposed Poem
I keep trying to write about something other than depression
But every time I commit ink to paper, I find it in the middle of every page
I can feel the sinking depression of the pen pressed against my paper skin
I can feel the weight of my words pushing down on my own shoulders as I try and write out this ache inside of me
I swear I'm not so sad all the time
But sometimes, I don't remember how I got from start to finish
I don't even know how I got to this point
They said I did poetry
That I won
That everything is okay
But honestly
All I keep seeing is your father getting closer and closer
I was so scared he was going to hit you
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You said he never did
But that his words were what cut through you like freshly sharpened knives
Etching painful memories into your bloody back
He was unpredictable
But so am I
And I honestly don't even know how tonight was going to go
If I even remember how I got home
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I know I am trying to hide things from myself
I know I am trying to hide in myself
To get lost and find that spark again
Maybe it's lingering in between skin and tissue
My cartilage is rubbing thin though
And now it's just bone against bone against bone
I feel like a skeleton
This paper skin, is just a coverup
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Yet
I am trying to find a working lighter
Something to help spark the light back into me
To show me the way to knowing what I want and who I am again
There's just been too much darkness
And I'm tired of ruining my vision with little flashing lights in the pitch black
But it's hard when everyone around you is feeling just as blind too
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And it's hard when I'm stuck in sudden flashbacks and uncertainties about the blackouts
I keep trying to remember and be there to give love to those who don't know what that really means
But
Every piece given is a piece gone
And it's been like that for a while now
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I give too much away until I feel empty without and empty within
But how can I care without caring
How can I spare myself from all this sadness but also love at the same time
This is not what love is supposed to be to me
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Love is not the opposite of hate
And I won't let it be
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So I'm trying
Trying to be more aware and participate
Because living with one foot in and one foot out the door is not how I want to see the world
I want to get back to noticing how fucking beautiful everything around me is
And to learn how to notice the small beauties about myself because there's got to be something there
I didn't make it all this way for nothing
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You know what my happy thought is?
Taking my kid to their first day of grade one
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That's
What keep me going.
About the Creator
Oneg In The Arctic
A storyteller and poet of arctic adventures, good food, identity, mental health, and more.
Co-founder of Queer Vocal Voices
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Comments (10)
So sad and relatable. I loved the happy thought at the end.
Such beautiful and emotional language. So very easy to relate to. Well done :)
Wow! This is beautifully tormenting. So. emotionally raw and vulnerable. The writing is fantastic.
Thank you!
Whoaaa this was absolute beautiful!
Very well written!
"I can feel the sinking depression of the pen pressed against my paper skin" This line is a short poem unto itself: I can feel The sinking Depression Of the pen Pressed against My paper skin An excellent double--maybe triple?--entendre!
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Love this line, "Every piece given is a piece gone." Well done.
Beautifully said.