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When the Flame Lowers

Dissipating time

By Sara CPublished about a year ago • 1 min read

At first it is a roar,

a restless tongue of light

licking the night clean.

Every crackle insists

on its own bright living.

But endings creep in quietly—

a soft collapse of embers,

the orange surrender

to a gray hush of ash.

The shadows reclaim

what the fire once defied.

I sit with it,

watching how brilliance

dims into memory.

It does not vanish,

it becomes—

a warmth folded into bone,

a smoke-threaded ghost

clinging to my breath.

All fires end,

but the dark is never whole:

in the ash lies the outline

of beginnings,

black soil waiting

for the spark’s return.

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Sara C

Don't you hate when you can't quite recall the word on the tip of your tongue, or when your thoughts get jumbled? Regular writing can help bridge the gap between your brain and mouth, making communication smoother and more confident.

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    Written by Sara C