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When Silence Became You

Some hearts echo louder when no one listens.

By Mahmood AfridiPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
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I hear your laugh in walls so bare,

Like ghosted whispers in the air.

The bed is made, the light is dim,

But still, I drown where you used to swim.

The clock forgets to count the pain,

It ticks but never speaks your name.

The shadows stretch where once you stood,

A trace of love misunderstood.

I call it peace, but it’s not true—

Just silence now that became you.

Tags: heartbreak, lost-love, emotional-poetry, grief, relationships

Cover Image Idea: A dimly lit room with one side of the bed empty, the light falling softly on the untouched pillow.

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Mahmood Afridi

I write about the quiet moments we often overlook — healing, self-growth, and the beauty hidden in everyday life. If you've ever felt lost in the noise, my words are a pause. Let's find meaning in the stillness, together.

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    Written by Mahmood Afridi