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When on Saturn

When I sleep I go to Saturn.

By KBPublished 3 months ago 1 min read
When on Saturn
Photo by SIMON LEE on Unsplash

When I sleep

I go to Saturn

I dance atop the rings

Until I realize

I can’t breathe


But when on Saturn

For those short few moments

Before realizing

My lungs cannot be filled

It is bliss


Because to dance around

On Saturn

Means my shoulders are lifted

And the day is through

And the hope that maybe

I will forget you.

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About the Creator


A snippet of life. Some real, some not. Thanks for reading!


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