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When on Saturn

When I sleep I go to Saturn.

By KBPublished 4 years ago • 1 min read
When on Saturn
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When I sleep

I go to Saturn

I dance atop the rings

Until I realize

I can’t breathe

**

But when on Saturn

For those short few moments

Before realizing

My lungs cannot be filled

It is bliss

**

Because to dance around

On Saturn

Means my shoulders are lifted

And the day is through

And the hope that maybe

I will forget you.

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    Written by KB