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When it all happened at once

for any of us to grasp it

By Jae QilinPublished 2 years ago 1 min read

it all happened so fast it was a blur

saw a lot that made us wonder

thought we felt the thunder

however that was just the start of the stir

when you were getting mixed up

worse n worse

not wanting to get fixed up

worse n worse

you were in that blur

then you saw the clarity

a pacifism rarity

clearing any disparity

alongside vibrant prosperity

it never seemed within grasp

you could barely feel it

but you remember seeing it

although it was faster than everything

you know it will not last over anything

do your best remembering

for there is something resembling

something you know

you cant place your finger on what

if ya do you wont bring your words to it

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Jae Qilin

Aspiring Poet

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Be wary that my pieces are Copywritten, however, if accredited we can discuss terms

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