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Sometimes when I'm silent,
And my mind is blank,
Is the moment I realize
How low I've sank.
***
And then somehow
Through others' speech
I learn so much more
than a human can teach.
***
And then it hits me,
That if only I would
Shut my mind
And just do as I should;
***
Then I will soar;
And then I will give;
And then I'll let go;
And then... I will live.
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Rachel S
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Comments (4)
That ending was so optimistic! Loved your poem!
That was a very good strategy.
Oh, my it's so bold, I keep thinking this one will give you a top story. it has to be ! your amazing at this
Sending hugs for your words.