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When I'm silent;

I learn to Live

By Rachel SPublished 19 days ago 1 min read
When I'm silent;
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Sometimes when I'm silent,

And my mind is blank,

Is the moment I realize

How low I've sank.

***

And then somehow

Through others' speech

I learn so much more

than a human can teach.

***

And then it hits me,

That if only I would

Shut my mind

And just do as I should;

***

Then I will soar;

And then I will give;

And then I'll let go;

And then... I will live.

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Rachel S

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Comments (4)

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran18 days ago

    That ending was so optimistic! Loved your poem!

  • That was a very good strategy.

  • T. Licht19 days ago

    Oh, my it's so bold, I keep thinking this one will give you a top story. it has to be ! your amazing at this

  • Sending hugs for your words.

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