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A poem

By Gal MuxPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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When
Photo by Filip Bunkens on Unsplash

When wild winds whirl wild wrecking worlds 

When wide winter wades

When whistling waters wash whole worlds whole

When wrongs wrap without withdraw 

When weary, withered 

When weak 

Wrecked with woes 

We wear whispering words 

With wisdom, with wait 

We will win winter wars

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About the Creator

Gal Mux

Lover of all things reading & writing, 🥭 &

🍍salsas, 🍓 & vanilla ice cream, MJ & Beyoncé.

Nothing you learn is ever wasted - Berry Gordy

So learn everything you can.

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Outstanding

Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

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  1. Masterful proofreading

    Zero grammar & spelling mistakes

  2. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

  3. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

  1. Expert insights and opinions

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    Niche topic & fresh perspectives

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • Ranjan Baral12 months ago

    Good one! Yes...after all WHEN?

  • Whoaaaa, this was done so amazingly! I love it so much!

  • Donna Fox (HKB)12 months ago

    Wow Gal, this was a really great Tautogram! You were so creative with your word choices and did a great job telling a story with only the letter W words! Truly amazing!

  • Grz Colmabout a year ago

    I think you chose a good letter - as this works very very well! 😊✨👍

  • ❤️Nice❗

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