What is comfort to me?
Is it as simple as a list?
Maybe.
I could put it to music
And dance in curtains
When I get bitten or stung.
I start my curious search:
It ranges over senses
But the feeling is the same:
A jigsaw made of
Warmth, pleasure, safety.
A well-placed cushion
On a reading chair
With a good book
Nestling in your lap.
A world awaiting you
Where your mind becomes stretched
But limbs are closeted.
Sun on your face,
Small birds on the feeders,
Sweet scent in your nose.
Earthly provisions,
Wafting past.
The boom of surf
On a golden beach,
Pebbles knocking and clicking
In the undertow.
Salt wind prodding pink cheeks
While small birds scatter,
Their long scimitar beaks
Leaving holes;
Their footprints triangular
Lines in the sand.
A glimpse of a shell,
spiral patterns,
satin sheen of opalescence.
Arms, circling, enveloping;
Caring.
Taste greeting you
From a stodgy meal.
Leaves falling, fire raging.
A full belly, a soporific.
A shared hopeful view on
The goodness of folk:
The humanity in humanity,
The rightness of things.
A song of reminders,
A time travelling tune
That transports you
To the vaults where
Memories retire.
A task done well
A fulfilled ambition -
Or is that satisfaction?
I am exploring my notions;
Thinking and searching.
Analysis of an emotion:
I do not normally entertain
This process.
I am surprised to feel comforted.
The delving has provided
Succour.
The writing, the placing of words
Has rested me;
I am relaxed.
It seems that comfort comes
In guises.
It shelters in the little things.
It is a humble beast,
lumbering and gentle,
Woolly, tactile, approachable.
It does not demand
Your attention.
It sneaks to soften you,
Like a cotton wool cloud.
You sink into it,
And it holds you.
Secure, for a time.
I will take this feeling
Unexpected as it is,
And hope that it holds me
A little longer.
About the Creator
Rachel Deeming
Mum, blogger, crafter, reviewer, writer, traveller: I love to write and I am not limited by form. Here, you will find stories, articles, opinion pieces, poems, all of which reflect me: who I am, what I love, what I feel, how I view things.
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A well-placed cushion!!!!!!!