What I Wish I Knew Before the Last Note
Lessons from a Fading Melody
By Edison kingsPublished 2 years ago • 1 min read

I thought the music would last forever—until silence claimed the final note."
I thought a song was endless,
That its echoes would outlive the hands
That first shaped its trembling chords.
But silence is a thief,
Stealing the last note before it learns to rest.
If I had known music could vanish,
I would have listened harder,
traced each vibration with my breath,
held the weight of every lingering pause
Like it was the voice of god.
But I mistook Forever for a chorus.
And let the melody slip.
Between the spaces, I left unsung.
Now, only quiet remains—
A hollow room where sound once lived,
Where ghosts hum a tune I no longer remember.
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