The words “I love you” rolled off my tongue so quickly
And when I said it,
I made sure to say it clearly.
Our love was strong,
But our communication wasn’t quite there.
Still, I adored the times and memories we shared.
Things weren’t perfect, but when are they ever.
I thought because you said you were sorry,
Things would get better,
But your words were only words,
So I should’ve known better.
Still, I loved when you said those three silly words.
Every time you said I love you,
I could hear white doves singing
And wedding bells ringing.
At least in my dreams
Because, in reality, our days were filled with screams
While our nights would get to the extremes.
Where did we go wrong?
I thought this was where I belonged.
You made me believe you loved me,
But now I see
That it wasn’t love,
And I could forget about the doves.
You were nothing more than a narcissist
That I could not resist.
I realized the best thing for me was to let go
And not stay in touch
Because I knew holding on,
Any longer would cost me too much.
About the Creator
Andre The First
Beginning my writing journey and hoping to inspire others to follow their dreams!
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