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What did you say?

It hurts in a different flavour

By Karun Published 3 months ago 1 min read
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What did you say

Why did you cry on that day

Why did you leave my hands

Why did you throw the friendship band

Why did the sun cry

Why did that love die

What did you say

On that day

You broke my way

Said let's be friends forever

Now you see me like a stranger

It hurts in a different flavour

Its all over

but would still do me a favor

Please don't see me like that

It hurts in a different flavour

I want the eyes that smiled at the sight

I want that friend who,

Who bought be candies

for me, She will even fight you

Got all like mindies

The friend who is sun bright

I want her back

Just smile dear friend

I am back on track

That would help the heart mend

This is a message that I forgot to send

Would you be back my friend

That would heal all my wound

I will take you all around

Let us sing songs and make sound

Please don't see me like that

It hurts in a different flavour

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About the Creator

Karun

🌿✨ Karun, a poet weaving emotions into verses, embarked on the journey of words to unearth the beauty of feelings. In the delicate dance of ink and emotion, my poetry delves into the nexus of the human heart and the natural world.✍️

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Outstanding

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  1. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

  2. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • Muhammad Shaheer3 months ago

    Let us sing songs and make sound! Great. Warm wishes

  • Daphsam3 months ago

    Wow, this is very powerful and dramatic. Love!

  • Alex H Mittelman 3 months ago

    That’s a great poem!

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