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Richly decadent,
Alluring to all, yet you
Ignore me. Your Loss!
This was originally posted on my website.
About the Creator
Daphsam
Loving Wife, Mom, Dog Mom- A Dyslexic dreamer who never thought I could read or write. But life changed, and I conquered my fears. I am an artist, photographer, wordsmith and illustrator. Looking to weave stories and poems with my artwork.
Comments (8)
Who ignores, you chocolate? Who? I need to know so that I can befriend this person, safe in the knowledge my stash will go untouched 😁
If I don't get my fix of chocolate soon, I'm gonna explode, lol! Loved your Haiku!
How could you treat such a lovely, tender cake with such indifference? My heart is broken. (And yes, my wife & I just shared an Ultimate Chocolate Cake at YaYa's Bistro that was at least 6x the size of what you have pictured.) I love the poem, but the 3rd line only has 3 rather than 5 syllables. You could give it an Italian flare: "ignore-ah me-ah" & that could fix it.
Ignored by a cake? Sad... 😔 😟
I like chocolate cake, but I am more of a pie person.
Outrageous! How dare you ignore it! I have more trouble ignoring white mud cake 😵💫
I adore haikus and this was so great!
Love this Haiku!