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Snacktime Sonata - Acrostic
Pop goes the wrapper
Of a hot summer dream
Purple grape
Sinful chocolate
Icy shivery tingles on your tongue
Cold, red sweet cherry
Lick every drop, and each sticky finger
Every colour of the rainbow tasting so good
About the Creator
Bonnie Bowerman
Just a curious soul with a crayon, at the beginning of my writing journey. There were many absorbing detours along the way.
I am so happy, I stumbled upon this community. The depth of talent here, takes my breath away!
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Comments (8)
This is lovely. I remember buying these from the ice cream bike.
Great acrostic but not so enticing during the sudden cold snap I’m experiencing 🥶
I love the rainbow here!
Oh yummy yummy in my tummy!! 😍
Ahhh, that is sooo refreshing! Loved your poem!
I love a good acrostic, it’s like a frozen popsicle on a summer’s day!
Love this!! The acrostic form suits it perfectly :)
Love the acrostic form for a poem like this! The first line is perfect word play to set things off with a pop