Welkin water weeps,
Washing walls
Wearing wild whitlow-wort wreaths
Weather-wrecked, warped walls
Weakened, wobbly waypoint walls
Where wayward wanderers wallow within
Wearily wishing
Weeping water
would wash ‘way
wrongdoings
Welkin water weeps,
Washing walls
Wearing wild whitlow-wort wreaths
Weather-wrecked, warped walls
Weakened, wobbly waypoint walls
Where wayward wanderers wallow within
Wearily wishing
Weeping water
would wash ‘way
wrongdoings
Comments (6)
Amazing! Each line carried so much weight. Beautiful job!
Wow!
You have a wonderful sense of flow and pace, andmake exquisite word choices! so sparse but every single damn word earns its place! Bravo, Morgana!
I loved the sounds in each line and how they transitioned so seamlessly, creating this lovely, melancholy story. Gorgeous :)
What I like about your entry is that it has a story, many are just words placed together. Well done
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