Weather Moods
A Poem About The Weather And How It Affects My Mood.
I wake up humming when the sun is shining,
I burst with energy from the moment of dawn,
The clouds come in suddenly, and I feel sad,
Then people ask me "Is it really that bad?
The clouds get darker,
A symbol of thunder,
My mood plummets into a deep depression,
And I just want to peacefully slumber,
When the sun shines,
And golden leaves fall,
My mood is mixed,
My emotions call;
I can be happy, and sad at the same time,
And I desperately wish for summertime,
When the rain falls,
Teardrops call;
My heart feels like a sinking shipwreck,
lost at sea,
Except I'm not lost,
I suffer from SAD,
So yes;
It can really be that bad.
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Carol Townend
Fiction, Horror, Sex, Love, Mental Health, Children's fiction and more. You'll find many stories in my profile. I don't believe in sticking with one Niche! I write, but I also read a lot too.
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Comments (3)
I was particularly impressed by how seamlessly you transition between different weather patterns and emotional states, highlighting the intricate ways in which our environment influences our inner world. Your poem is a beautiful reminder of the profound interplay between the external and internal landscapes.
You have beautifully captured the intimate connection between the external world and our internal experiences.... really loved your poem.....,😊😊😊
Beautifully written! How you expressed the feelings you have with the different seasons. I'm sorry that you have SAD. It must be hard. This should on top story!