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we will all just say, "so long"

if it were allowed (he said) - we'd all leave in a throng

By kory salajkaPublished 5 months ago 1 min read
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fish | ink on paper | original art 2023

we will all just say, "so long" it's all gotten to be so much (she said) if it were allowed (he said) - we'd all leave in a throng

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i'm not sure that it would be so wrong it's probably always been like this (she said) we will all just say, "so long"

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we can ask anybody who does belong if they'd mind it very much (she said) if it were allowed (he said) - we'd all leave in a throng

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i'll turn it into a merry song once we decide we'll go (she said) we will all just say, "so long"

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when we are all ready, we'll bang that gong i'm sure it will be easy to agree (she said) if it were allowed (he said) - we'd all leave in a throng

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we'll all line up from the weakest to the strong and we'll blow our kisses goodbye (she said) we will all just say, "so long" if it were allowed (he said) - we'd all leave in a throng

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for the villanelle challenge. lovey to use the prompts to try new things. i'll try another. fun to try. never have. thanks for reading! - kory

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kory salajka

i am a multi-disciplinary artist who has come to writing haiku daily to let out what’s inside as i live about the world, and i am loving it - (all original art)

connect w/ me and/or check out my visual art on instragram

or my website

thanks!

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