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We all need a bit more of this

It's okay to rely on what You believe, but don't let it cloud what You truly see.

By Thavien YliasterPublished 4 years ago • 1 min read
We all need a bit more of this
Photo by Andreas Fickl on Unsplash

I think Nietsche wants us to not rely so much on outside forces

So, we should use more common sense along with school courses

We should all learn a bit from life

Not everything's our fault that causes us a bit of strife

Sometimes we overthink our knowledge sources

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Author's Notes: This limerick was originally commented on Sonia Heidi Unruh's limerick, "What Silly Ol' Fred Said."

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Thavien Yliaster

Thank You for stopping by. Please, make yourself comfortable. I'm a novice poet, fiction writer, and dream journalist.

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