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Watery Weightlessness

Tautogram about the power of the sea

By Paul StewartPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
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Wonderful watery weightlessness

Wading

Wandering with wide-eyed wonderment

Wading

Wonderful watery wonderland

Waiting

Waves washing

When whispering water whispers

"Welcome, weary watery wanderer," Warning?

Weary?

Whistling wind warbling

Washing waves

Weakening waves

Wind wielding watery weapons, waging war

Watery wanderer weaponless, welcoming weakness

Willpower waning

Weary

*

Weakening

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Weightless

*

Wakeless

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Thank you for reading. My entry for the letter W into the Vocal Tautogram Challenge. More information can be found here about it.

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About the Creator

Paul Stewart

Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.

Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.

"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson

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  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a year ago

    This is great Paul

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Wow! The power and strength of water equally fascinates and intimidates me. This was an amazing portrayal of the duality of its nature. Bravo :) fin

  • Megabout a year ago

    Loved this tautogram!

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Love this! Beautiful and wishful. Great job! Tautograms are hard!!

  • Gerald Holmesabout a year ago

    Well, what wonderful words.

  • Whoaaa, wonderful wading waiting wallowing whispers whimpering! No idea what I meant to say, I just typed a bunch of W words. But I think I meant to say that you blew my mind with this!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    very nicely done.

  • Donna Reneeabout a year ago

    Ooooh nice one, Paul!!

  • Dana Stewartabout a year ago

    Awesome! W's rule :)

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