Waterfall smooth fall against the rocks
A lover of the smooth melody it makes
Tell the story of an ancient timeless story
Enter its hypnotic portal of being lost in time
Running water through the smooth rocks of the earth
Falling water from up high
A sound that makes you want to listen to it forever
Longing for its mystical magic power to behold
Life is full of waterfalls, did you fall for its smooth beauty
Rocks near the falls are smooth
Open the portal of beautiful melody
Come to Endless trickling water
Kindness of the years brings smooth rock
About the Creator
Mariann Carroll
Proactive for positive change.Born in the City of Chicago ,Illinois.
Multi race .Studied in a foreign country .Fluent in several languages .
fascinated by diversity.A Romantic and a dreamer.Interest in healthy living
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Comments (7)
The sound of water being so soothing. I can just imagine nodding off atop the rocks. So very smooth.
This was so beautiful! I felt like I was right there at the waterfall! Such a wonderful acrostic!
Tender anointing, gentle showers, raw power.
gorgeous! Especially the last line...Kindness truly is a powerful thing!
Nice work at the acrostic Mariann. Wonderful and relaxing! ☺️👏
Beautiful acrostic, Mariann!
Great acrostic