A mouthful of air
Caught in waves of emotion
Unable to swim
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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
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Author's Note: This was originally written for the first round the 2024 NYC Midnight 100-word Microfiction Challenge, but has been revised into a longer microfiction. My assignment included the following: Genre - Horror, Action - Signing a guestbook, Word - trail
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Superb!
Quite the expression of drowning and the image is perfect.
Amazing!
Great analogy
Wow. That amazing. Well done.
I'm sure I didn't get the 100% of it! That is such profound!
Amazingly peened Really love it 😀
Whoaaaa, that was so profound! Loved this!