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WARNING: Red Pens in Use

A Blank Verse Poem

By Polite AdjacentPublished 8 months ago • Updated 8 months ago • 1 min read
Honorable Mention in The Unnecessary Line Challenge

They will not set aside the power it gives

Seek out their help, but move with careful steps

Your openness carries a strength as well

Endure the vicious nature found in ink

You may receive rough lines of anger. Haste.

Perhaps with pure intent to offer help

Do not let pens scratch deeper than the page

Take what will help, and set the rest aside

Excuse me, can I go to the bathroom?

While strikes of red provide a harsh support

We are striving to alter the system

But for today, please approach with caution

The red ink may bleed, but do not be afraid

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Polite Adjacent

I am experimenting with my writing on Vocal while drafting my romance novel.

Follow my novel-writing journey here: youtube.com/@politeadjacent

I also share reflections about minimalism and money here: politeadjacent.blogspot.com

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    Written by Polite Adjacent