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Vivid Promises Lurk

Haiku (corrected)

By Juanita BuckPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
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Vivid promises lurk

Under smooth quiet water,

Thoughts splashing past.

Thoughts splashing past.

Dancing freely on ripples;

This muddy colour.

This muddy colour,

Blossoming with moonlight's touch.

Rocking and sparkling!

Rocking and sparkling!

Glowing in darkness; swaying.

Swirling and springing.

Swirling and springing,

These desires fly freely!

Quietly I lay.

***

Quietly I lay.

Lethargic, heeding no sense.

Another tiny death.

Another tiny death,

Mini gusting feelings taunting,

Little by little.

Little by little

Pummeling a sluggish breast,

Guiding this lungful.

Guiding this lungful

With desire and yearning,

Tossing and turning.

Tossing and turning,

Twisting ideas and thoughts.

Bitter winds blowing.

Bitter winds blowing

Flowers flickering and flying.

Fragile rainbow’s shine.

Fragile rainbow’s shine.

Every colour is vital.

Shimmering dream arc.

***

Shimmering dream arc

Filling the world everywhere

With hopeful promise.

With hopeful promise,

Firing these unconscious minds:

All colours matter.

All colours matter

Bringing warmth and compassion

Honesty and love.

Honesty and love.

These embers burning with passion,

Affect our conscious.

Affect our conscious

With the entire rainbow.

Vivid promises lurk.

***

surreal poetry
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About the Creator

Juanita Buck

Telling stories since I could intelligibility write, now I do it in these categories:

Writer of poetry

Writer of fan fiction

Writer of children's stories

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