Vial of Air: The Healthcare Crisis
When the healers are used up.
Once upon a dry stick of hope,
When empathy is gone,
Told to cope with pains and falls
Until we snap under bricks
Meant to keep us safe from uncertainty.
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Our health is held up high
By a tent of no replies.
Where are the nurses, doctors, surgeons?
Those who seem to be awfully kind?
“Do you think it’s my bladder?
Something pressing down?
The capacity is low.”
“It’s not our job to go and pry.”
Using a dipstick
To find the answers:
The cheapest, inaccurate exit.
Nothing will be prescribed
When symptoms are consistent.
We are a clinician to the blind;
We are the patient they want to help
But don’t ever want to see.
There is no hope
When the system is in a state of freeze,
Diagnosed by severity,
Waiting until it’s too late,
Voice recording the slow celerity.
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But nurses are used,
We are told.
Doctors abused,
We all know.
Surgeons exploited
By their bosses.
Our appointments they withhold;
Our appointments they delay;
They spend you from day to day
This is how they were all trained.
They’ve been sharpened by their knowledge
But used until they are useless vials of air.
About the Creator
Caitlin Charlton
Writer first. Close reader and self‑taught critic shaping eloquence.
A survivor reclaiming her territory.
I write dark fiction and poetry through symbol, shadow, and fracture.
Always sharpening the craft. ✏️🔥👠
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