What are the strongest values you uphold?
Where do you place your energy and goals?
That's where you hold your secrets, some untold,
Which shine a light on your true life controls.
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Perhaps you're wanting great prestige or fame,
And honor is the purpose for your deeds.
You want a legacy built in your name.
Will notoriety fulfill your needs?
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You could be seeking monetary gains,
And hoping for those big, elusive breaks.
But why go through the effort and the pains?
Is money all the value that life makes?
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I put it forth that love's a grander plan,
And if you wear your heart for all to see,
Your glory and your wealth in your life span,
Are finding that your days are more carefree.
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So find some value loving those around,
And your value to others will compound.
About the Creator
Julie Lacksonen
Julie has been a music teacher at a public school in Arizona since 1987. She enjoys writing, reading, walking, swimming, and spending time with family.
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That ending is beautiful
"So find some value loving those around, / And your value to others will compound." - Absolutely! Lovely poem!
Excellent little poem.