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Vacant Look

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By Brenton FPublished 2 months ago Updated 2 months ago 1 min read
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a cover blown of an image flown

for that power alone, it will atone

in a strange land yet so close to home

one amongst thousands but so alone

fully disguised

in a vacant look

a silly diffused

different look

a kind of blatant

complacent patent look

a bare stare,

a pretty vacant look

all those empty crystal eyed moments form

cast away like heart beats to tomorrows dawn

like many mirrored rain drops in a summer storm

a fading night brightens into a brand new morn

completely hidden

in a vacant look

out in the open

it’s a different look

out of hoping

flat lined patent look

out of fears

a pretty vacant look

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and

Stream of Consciousness
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About the Creator

Brenton F

It's just a token of my extreme - Frank Zappa

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I have an eBook, a collection of my favourite pieces

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  • Kodah2 months ago

    ❣️ Brilliant poem Brent!! ❣️

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