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By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 2 months ago β€’ 1 min read

Fighting for a solace

That seems out of my reach...

I am struggling not for possessions

But to be free...

I'm Giving the Best

With all, that I've Got...

Going aimlessly

Throughout my implements

I don't have a lot...

When my mind

Can't nap,

How do I sleep?

When I'm comfortless,

Who will comfort me?

When I'm short of breath,

Who will help me breathe?...

My eyes are filled with

Tears...How can I see?

Imagine I have a miracle

Where will it lead??

Out of everything in the world

I only wanted to be me...

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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)

Your Mind is

A Wonderland of

Your Imagination

Make it Beautiful!


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  • Mariann Carroll2 months ago

    Lovely πŸ’—

  • Oof, this hit me hard! This was so emotional and very deep!

  • Heather Hubler2 months ago

    Those first few lines really hit me. This was so honest and emotional. I think we can all feel this way sometimes. I know I do. I see you and all the good you try to share, so keep doing you :) Great work

  • Holly Pheni2 months ago

    This is beautiful! Keep being you, because you have a good heart and a talent to share.

  • Life is filled with so many questions and you find them well with your poetry. As always good job!

  • Beautiful

  • C. H. Richard2 months ago

    ❀️ Love this❀️ Last line is beautiful

  • Denise E Lindquist2 months ago

    Thank youπŸ’•

  • Lisa A Lachapelle2 months ago


  • Babs Iverson2 months ago

    Super!!! Loved itπŸ’•πŸ’–πŸ˜Š

  • Cathy holmes2 months ago

    Beautiful piece. Well done.

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  • I think I have a new favorite!!!

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