Fighting for a solace
That seems out of my reach...
I am struggling not for possessions
But to be free...
I'm Giving the Best
With all, that I've Got...
Going aimlessly
Throughout my implements
I don't have a lot...
When my mind
Can't nap,
How do I sleep?
When I'm comfortless,
Who will comfort me?
When I'm short of breath,
Who will help me breathe?...
My eyes are filled with
Tears...How can I see?
Imagine I have a miracle
Where will it lead??
Out of everything in the world
I only wanted to be me...
About the Creator
HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
Your Mind is
A Wonderland of
Your Imagination
Make it Beautiful!
#IAmHandsomelouii
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This is for the latest Vocal challenge that you can read about below. The limerick only clocks in at thirty words, but I hope it brings a smile to your face. I can't change the font or size in the Vocal editor so took a screenshot of my limerick as well
By Mike Singleton - Mikeydred8 days ago in Poets
Indelible
Not everyone who walks into your life is meant to stay forever. This is a concept that has always been difficult for me to reconcile with. Somehow, my mind has been programmed to hold on, to make relationships work no matter what. Maybe I’m afraid of changes, of loss and most importantly, of being forgotten.
By Maahi Trivedi7 days ago in Poets
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Lovely 💗
Oof, this hit me hard! This was so emotional and very deep!
Those first few lines really hit me. This was so honest and emotional. I think we can all feel this way sometimes. I know I do. I see you and all the good you try to share, so keep doing you :) Great work
This is beautiful! Keep being you, because you have a good heart and a talent to share.
Life is filled with so many questions and you find them well with your poetry. As always good job!
Beautiful
❤️ Love this❤️ Last line is beautiful
Thank you💕
Beautiful!
Super!!! Loved it💕💖😊
Beautiful piece. Well done.
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I think I have a new favorite!!!