You're blue raspberry.
I'm stained from synthetic dye.
From now on — real fruit.
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Katie
My whole life I have loved writing, but haven't made the time for it. I'm trying to remedy that now.
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My life is somewhat stressful right now. Actually, my husband and I are somewhat stressed right now. With the usual stresses of work, finances, and life, my mother-in-law has terminal cancer and is fading fast. At the time of this writing, she is stable, and we have help from cousins to see her, spend time with her, and help with her care.
By J. Delaney-Howe7 days ago in Psyche
Comments (5)
That sneaky 'blue' raspberry! Clever and well written :)
I can taste it. 💙
This is great. That last line nails it. Well done.
It's difficult to evoke emotions in three lines but you nailed it!
That was nice, the problem is that haiku ar short so not sure if my read will register