Unforeseen Loss
Remembering a Beloved Brother's Tragic Fate
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In the shadows of the day's fading light,
Amidst laughter and smiles, the day was so bright,
I carried on, clueless, without indication,
Little did I know what was destined to happen.
The morning dawned, promising and honest,
Not a whisper of worry, not a hint of despair.
I thought he was safe, but behind bars, he wasn't,
Destiny weaves tales, plans yet unmade.
Hours unfolded, the sun painted the sky,
Not a ripple of sorrow, not a quake nearby.
His children, innocent and free,
Love adorned his wife, his family, and his family tree.
I laughed and smiled, in the day's sweet grace,
Not knowing the cruel fate about to embrace.
The world spun on, a fantasy so pure,
Little did I know what my heart was to endure.
As the evening descended,
A knock on the door pierced the room.
Tears streamed down, the news too cold,
My brother, their love, now a treasure.
A stranger stole his life in an instant,
His laughter silenced his smile ends.
His children are innocent; their world is now ripped,
His wife was a beacon in the storm's scorn.
His parents weep, a father's moan,
His mother's eternal grief is unknown.
His siblings shattered; their hearts ached, curious,
A void in their lives permanently, furious
In the cradle of night, a tragedy profound,
A brother lost, in silence, resound.
From joy to despair, in the blink of an eye,
A life destroyed, leaving loved ones to cry.
His spirit lives on in memories illustrated,
In tales untold, in moments lamented.
In the hearts he touched, in love's embrace,
In a bond unbroken, in eternal grace.
About the Creator
Deborah Rivera Valentin
33, a boy mom with Puerto Rican roots in Massachusetts. Words? My refuge. Life's storms—from childhood days surrounded by struggle—drugs, alcohol, and abuse—I've fought for my place. In the pages of a notebook, I found my sanctuary. 📖✨
Comments (1)
Gosh this was so heartbreaking. Such a poignant and emotional poem.