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Underwater Awakening

Healing With Earth’s Magical Elixir

By NikkiDeeFit | Nicole DeFelice OliverPublished 2 years ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
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Underwater Awakening
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Serenity beneath

the surface.

A sacred space beholds

a certain quiet —

calm, ambience,

effortlessly engulfing.

Treasure for those

seeking — the willing

are weightless, painless,

embraced in flow.

An infinite elixir,

drunken in-existence

uniting existence in

fluid alchemy.

A muted migration, the

pressure lifts, my

held breath stills,

my senses

surrendered.

A haven, sought

but often never

known by a

forced tide; drift.

- Underwater Awakening

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NikkiDeeFit | Nicole DeFelice Oliver

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  • Just Daniel2 years ago

    Thank you for sharing your underwater adventures in poem format, by making it seem like ad adventure, it lessens the effects of the great, blue unknown to some individuals. I feel like the water is still pretty scary though! I know there is nothing to fear but fear itself, but we'll see how I can overcome this obstacle haha. Also, a few question to you (if you have time!): Did you find it difficult for you to post your poem in this format? If you have submitted poems to challenges before, how did you do it and did you find it difficult? I have been trying to submit some of my older poems to a challenge, but the submission bar won't display these past poems. Many thanks in advance! Daniel

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