Underneath That Prada Skirt
They will crucify your character before catching a glimpse of what you are made of…
She is insecure,
With broken devotion…
She Desires Passion,
Nevertheless obtains commotion…
With her Chin 🆙
She Sashay,
As,
Silent questions chime through the wind.
“Does she know where she's Going To?”
“Do you suppose she will succeed?”
No Time to Be Afraid,
Depending on the Universe,
With all her Faith,
She survived to Thrive…
Because Underneath That
Prada Skirt
She was just
A Regular Girl💜💋🦋
Singing Her Pleasure Principle Blues 🎷 🎶
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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
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Comments (13)
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Fabulous!!! Loving it!!!❤️❤️💕
Great work...!so powerful
I'm sooooo in love with your subtitle! Your poem was extremely powerful!
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I was listening to "Do you know where you're go to, do you like the things that life is showing you". Than I read your poem with the line "Does she know where she is going to". Weird but hey....telepathy lives.
I liked both of the lines lifted up below, but the one that really got to me was the last: "Singing her Pleasure Principle blues."
Snaps all around! So empowering & Simply flawless! Go on now... ❤
loved "she survived to thrive" and that you showed us the person beneath....we all have layers and you nailed it!
Well done.
This reminds me so much of a YouTube video about relationships. It was about how women go around thinking they have a good man based on his looks and surafce actions, but when they open the Tiffany box or Gucci bag there's nothing inside. Love this line: "Silent questions chime through the wind."
Lovely piece. Well done.
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