last one today friends,
life can change in a heartbeat,
or, the lack of one,
losing a loved one brings uncommon change to the ongoing tomorrows,
suddenly, you are alone,
all you had and loved is gone,
why?
how?
where to go now?
tomorrow’s are empty!
plans are without togetherness!
life goes on,
or does it?
glued in the aftermath of grief, we cling to memories,
memories keep us in touch,
reconciled,
soothing the pain of a broken heart!
we continue for the sake of continuing,
what remains seeks what has gone, knowing it will never be again.
we stagger under that realization hoping to find peace in time,
we know our pain,
we conquer with it!!
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Moe Radosevich
I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you
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Final Call
She flings her arms around my neck and squeezes me like she’s never going to let me go. My head spins as her lips brush against my cheek. She must be able to feel my heart thumping in my chest. I shuffle backwards and ram my hands into my coat pockets, watching her reach down and heave the rucksack across her shoulders.
By Caroline Craven3 days ago in Fiction
Comments (4)
I felt this one when I read it out loud. Well done.
Another great job 👏
I am intrigued by the idea of conquering with pain.
love this line " we stagger under the realization hoping to find peace in time," love that. Well done ♥️