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Two minutes of life

You are slowly melting away

By Ahamed ThousifPublished 7 months ago β€’ 1 min read

Two minutes of life

I put the rocket on my lips 🚬

Its smoke goes inside

Also, attacks the lungs

It seems to my brain

I say no to this

But don't forget to accept...

In an air-sealed bag

Reaching for smoke

I am also venting the air

I take my life too

You are slowly melting away 🚬

You are slowly melting me too

You go ahead

You follow me too...

I burn you with fire

You make me smoke 🚬🚬

In the end, you win...

I don't smoke 🚬🚬🚬

There is no price for our lives.

Thanks for reading!

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran7 months ago

    This was so poignant and emotional! Loved your poem!

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