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Twisted Redemption

A Surreal Poem with Inverted Eyes

By EYHCSPublished 9 months ago 1 min read
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The squandered chance.

The sacrifice made.

The nerves twisted.

The gut check.

The bloodshed seeped through wounded bones.

By EYHCS

Flash forward a thousand years.

Everyone give your loudest cheer.

The past is now in the rear.

As evident by the single tear.

😢

Yet, you query what has changed.

How have you rearranged?

Still wearing the same filthy skins.

Still refusing to make amends.

🤑🫰🏾

The cost paid.

The memories raid.

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The pain sears through chartered veins.

No longer do you ride these lanes.

For fear of releasing the pent-up reins.

By EYHCS

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About the Creator

EYHCS

Poet by birth. Writer by craft. Artist by nature. I write poems, prose, short stories, fiction, and realism works of art dissecting the human condition and the resilience of the human mind. Many of my pieces are metaphoric stanzas.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran8 months ago

    This was so poignant and relatable! I loved it!

  • Tiffany Gordon 8 months ago

    Wonderful job!

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