Trust Me, Alien Boi!!!!👽
~Extraterrestrial Poem Challenge~
E to the T 👽,
I will be introducing you to the concept of Earthly fun...
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🎉The first thing I'd do is buy you a fresh new pair of comfy kicks to wear...
🎉Then, I'd have you transport us to the WA State Fair... where I'd win you a ginormously-adorable, stuffed teddy bear...
🎉Then, we'd ride rollercoaster rides until we saw nothing but stars...
🎉Then, we'd pig out on elephant ears and inelegantly drive bumper cars...
🎉Then, I'd have you transport us to the mall for a fabulous fashion haul...
🎉Then, we'd take wacky pictures in the mall photo booth...while making silly faces, showing all tooth...
🎉Then, we'd eat Cinnabons & drink iced lattes until the fat lady sings...
🎉Then, we'd stop by the candy store to purchase lollipop rings...
🎉Then, we'd take a series of refreshing CPAP naps until 11 p.m....
🎉Then, it'd be off to the club, riding in a purple Jeep with lavender rims...
🎉Then, we'd dance all night to old-school Hip Hop til the sun came up, while sipping Mountain Dew Pitch Black Slurpees out of refillable, red cups...
**You're going 2 have the time of your life!!!! Trust me, Alien Boi, it'll be nothing but fun, no strife! 😊
About the Creator
Tiffany Gordon
I am a super-spiritual, fun-loving artist, writer, & peer-counselor residing in the Pacific Northwest. I am also an Institute of Children's Literature alumna who enjoys writing about the triumph of the human spirit.
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I missed this entry Tiffany! Very fun. I particularly liked the “nothing but stars” part on the rollercoaster! 😁 I don’t know what Cinnabons are… let me check.. congrats on this top story!😊👍
This is so fun! I want to be that alien 😍
This is such an amazing poem - you are the perfect person to give this alien an adventure! Wonderful work, my friend! ❤️
Great work! ♥️
This isn’t just a poem, it’s an adventure. Love it Tiff ❤️
This poem makes me want to hang out with you. Clearly you know how to have fun!
Congratulations on top story,
This was so much fun and so Tiffy. Your alien sounds like he is so open to discovering earthly fun. Well done and well deserved TS. Hiya alien Boi.
That day sounds like a blast! Although I might be done at CPAP nap. Some very good sleep. Lol. Loved this! ❤️❤️🦋🦋❤️🦋🦋❤️❤️
Amazing! Great job!
Congratulations Tiffany! 🥰
I'm not an alien (promise, lol) but I want to go have this day!! You brought so much joy to this and I loved the rap feeling of it :) Awesome work, Tiffany :) Congrats on Top Story!
There it is! Congrats on the Top Story, Tiffany! ❤️
🤣🤣🤣. Love it! And now I’m craving Cinnabon 😋😋
That alien will be exhausted! Congrats on TS!
Yay🎉Congratulations on Your Top Story🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
This is so very brilliant, Tiffany! Glad this got Top Story! Congrats!
So joyful! Loved it! 🤍 Congrats on top story!
This is such a lovely and lovely piece that fills the reader with the unabashed joy of unhindered living. Excellent job here!!!
What an awesome piece of fun you put out for us to enjoy. Well done Tiff!
This was like so much of fun! I'm very that the alien would have enjoyed himself veryyyy much! Loved your poem!
This is so fun! Nice job.
That was fun. Great job.
Love this
That was such a fun read! Please text me, and I'll join!