Troubling Times
Tales too threatening to tell to timid types.
Trusted troops - they turn the tide,
Testament to the truly tried.
Troublesome, tempted, too terrified,
To tell the tales they've televised.
_____Travelling time, twid’ling thumbs.
Tortured thoughts. The tired toes,
Trying to test these, that, those -
Too tender to touch, to transpose.
_____Taking troops to timeless tombs.
Tip-toe through the tulips today.
Tomorrow – trudge through tissue tamed.
Twisted torsos there to test – they
Take that, that they’ve time to trade.
_____Twitching thumbs to travel time.
Tinkering too timelessly there,
To tread the tracks, to trace the tears.
Therefore, thicken’d through thoughts, through tiers,
_____Tossing tired troops through time.
Though, today the teary troops transform,
To theologians trashedly torn,
To teachers turning trees to thorns.
To terr’rists toppling tainted thrones.
_____Twitching, travelling, twisting tones.
Tomorrow turns tormented tales,
Tales too tatter’d, tinged to tell.
Those tales that troops testify they’ll
_____Text to touchpad telephones.
About the Creator
John Oliver Smith
Baby, son, brother, child, student, collector, farmer, photographer, player, uncle, coach, husband, student, writer, teacher, father, science guy, fan, coach, grandfather, comedian, traveler, chef, story-teller, driver, regular guy!!
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insight
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Comments (6)
Supposedly, this poem was a runner-up in the Tautogram Challenge, which entitled me to a $25 prize. That was nearly 2 months ago and as of yet, I have not received any money or notice about how to claim the money. Do I need to apply or fill out a form? If someone from Vocal sees this comment, please contact me and let me know. Thanks!!
Wow, this was very touching, honoring and emotional! Fantastic job, John! Congrats on your placement in the challenge!
This was great. I could feel the the emotion building as I read. Nice work.
Outstanding tautogram. It flowed so graciously telling your story. Congrats on runner up.
Amazing! From graphic to subtlety, this flowed so well, I forgot for a moment I was still reading a tautogram! Congrats!
Congratulations on runner up!!!