Triggering Perfection
philosophical poetic musings about Planet Earth and it’s state of absolute perfection
By Kayleigh Fraser ✨Published about a month ago • 1 min read
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it took a while for this understanding
to settle calmly within,
it’s initial crash landing
was unwelcome
and unnerving
just as all truths
appear to be
how is it possible?
how can it be so?
that this world of infinite
suffering souls
is absolutely
completely whole?
a perfect stage
for every role
a perfect lesson
for those seeking blessing
a perfect course
for overcoming remorse
a perfect opportunity
to test human limits of sanity
a perfect creation
for man’s enslavement
and subsequent reprieve
if he can dare to believe
he is worthy to achieve
his freedom
About the Creator
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Comments (5)
This would of suffering souls is completely whole? Hmmm. I don't see it that way. But I loved your poem, it was very thought provoking!
Very thought provoking Kayleigh!
We are definitely worthy of our freedom but how we achieve the freedom is the key 💗Excellent poem
Beautiful
Love the message here, and the rhyming you had as well (I don't know if you could tell, but I love rhyming 😂). Can you imagine if humanity just suddenly disappeared from earth? I think there is a reason why AI in movies eventually decide it's better to end humanity 😅