Transient Fire
The Final Exhale- a Haiku
By Kristen BalyeatPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
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Breath fades, mine since birth.
Life’s heart stream slows. Transient
fire exhales to Earth.
About the Creator
Kristen Balyeat
Words fly to me on the wind, bump into me as I'm strolling the city, splash me in the face while I rest by the river, and shake me awake in the middle of the night– I’m humbly one of the many vessels they use to come to life.
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