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Transformation

An Acrostic Poem

By Ali SPPublished about a month ago 1 min read
Top Story - April 2024
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Transformation
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Even when you try to hinder my potential

Covering me with a blanket of self-doubt to the point of suffocation

Little do you know, but I refuse to remain in your shadow

In me, you see a mere shell of a human being, incapable of anything

Perhaps my transformation requires a period of darkness

Shining light in areas once obscured to me

Eventually, when I re-emerge, you will be stunned by the sight you see

..............

Thank you for reading!

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About the Creator

Ali SP

Ali has found a renewed passion for reading and creating. It is now a form of expression for her– another creative outlet which she works to improve upon.

https://www.instagram.com/art.ismyrefuge/

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  • Natalie Wilkinsonabout a month ago

    Excellent!

  • The Writer about a month ago

    beautiful!!!

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a month ago

    Yesterday when I am commenting it was a story, but today it is a top story. I am so happy.!!!

  • Andrea Corwin about a month ago

    And...Congrats on TS.❤️

  • Andrea Corwin about a month ago

    Very compelling eclipse acrostic!

  • Gina C.about a month ago

    Beautiful entry!

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Joe O’Connorabout a month ago

    “Shining light in areas once obscured to me” is a great line Ali, and this entry feels like someone regaining themselves, and becoming stronger 👏🏾

  • D.K. Shepardabout a month ago

    Beautiful acrostic and challenge entry! Loved “Perhaps my transformation requires a period of darkness”

  • Cathy holmesabout a month ago

    This is a beautiful entry. Congrats on the TS.

  • Silver Serpent Booksabout a month ago

    This is absolutely beautiful. Loved how you did this!

  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a month ago

    Very enjoyable and inspiring piece!! 🤩❤️🥰

  • Tiffany Gordon about a month ago

    Stunning work! Go Ali! Very inspirational!👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a month ago

    A lovely Acrostic poem!

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    This was extremely powerful and so beautifully written! Loved your Acrostic!

  • Babs Iversonabout a month ago

    Awesome!!! Ali SP, your poem Transformation is so inspiring!!! Loved it!!!💕❤️❤️

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