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Touch ‘Em All

Home Run

By Moe RadosevichPublished 12 months ago Updated 12 months ago 1 min read
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Touch ‘Em All
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I could taste the adrenaline, flooding his body,

I could feel his heart beating, fast, faster,

I could see his legs pushing, churning, taking extra long strides,

I could smell victory, his victory, this moment,

I could hear teammates screaming, fans cheering him on,

I could glow with pride as he crossed the plate,

his first home run,

well done grandson.

Thank you for reading.

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About the Creator

Moe Radosevich

I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you

Write on my friends

Sure would appreciate more reads and maybe some tips or pledges thank you

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  • HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)12 months ago

    Tremendous Job ❤️😉

  • Kalina Bethany12 months ago

    So exciting! 😊

  • Awww, this was so wonderful!

  • Cathy holmes12 months ago

    Aww. That is so sweet. Love it.

  • Babs Iverson12 months ago

    Fabulous!!! Loved it!!!💖💖💕

  • Gina C.12 months ago

    AW! This is so sweet. :)

  • It’s outta here

  • That was excellent, loved the POV on this story!

  • Dana Crandell12 months ago

    Way to go, Grandpa! I love it!

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