Touch ‘Em All
Home Run
I could taste the adrenaline, flooding his body,
I could feel his heart beating, fast, faster,
I could see his legs pushing, churning, taking extra long strides,
I could smell victory, his victory, this moment,
I could hear teammates screaming, fans cheering him on,
I could glow with pride as he crossed the plate,
his first home run,
well done grandson.
Thank you for reading.
About the Creator
Moe Radosevich
I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you
Write on my friends
Sure would appreciate more reads and maybe some tips or pledges thank you
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Comments (9)
Tremendous Job ❤️😉
So exciting! 😊
Awww, this was so wonderful!
Aww. That is so sweet. Love it.
Fabulous!!! Loved it!!!💖💖💕
AW! This is so sweet. :)
It’s outta here
That was excellent, loved the POV on this story!
Way to go, Grandpa! I love it!