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TOO DEEP FOR ME

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By Victor MendezPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
TOO DEEP FOR ME
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TOO DEEP FOR ME

7-5-2025

I am pretentious

As you can see

Because if I am not

then I am not me

And I am only a reflection

of failings of direction..and..

self-doubt

self-critique

will ruin my complexion.

Thus I write for you

To twist your world..

..your mind imbue..

With questions?

Like..

What may be the meaning here?

This wording being quite so queer

That I fail as a poetic seer..

And I am left behind I fear!

But...

I get it!

I understand.

If the poem is too easy

Makes the mind a bit uneasy

If the poem is naught but bland.

Sweet Dreams

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About the Creator

Victor Mendez

Born in 1958.There's a lot of road beneath these feet.Worn out pairs upon pairs of shoes.Been a ranch kid,a city kid,a Marine,a dad, a grandfather now,an avid reader and just recently began writing poetry in 2015 just to vent.

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